I copied these from someone (sorry, I can't give attribution)--they're pretty much the things that most writers learn by the time they had their first or second critique. But they're worth repeating. (And is there anyone out there who's been caught in the situation pictured here? I prepare, and add a spare roll when the one in use get low. How about you?)
RULES FOR WRITERS:
-Don't overwrite. We've all heard it--never use a dollar word when a dime one will do.
-Don't use too may adjectives and adverbs. I was initially told to use none of these, but you have to use some.
-Write tight. Or, take unnecessary words out with your first edit.
-Don't use cliches, platitudes, and other similar words.
-Vary sentence length. No run-on sentences.
-Avoid passive verbs and passive construction.
-Show, don't tell. (This, plus the above, are the first lessons a writer learns--and they're important).
There are more, but that's enough for now. What others can you think of.
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