Friday, April 13, 2012

Writing: The Denouement

One last post on writing, if you'll indulge me. (You never knew writers had to think of all this stuff, did you? Neither did I until I got into it.)

The word denouement (pronounced day-new-mah, sort of) comes from a French word that means a knot. And that's exactly what it does--it ties things up at the end. The conclusion of the story answers questions and brings the story to its logical (or illogical) finish.

But does the denouement really answer all the reader's questions? In some instances, no--there may be some things left to the reader's imagination. In my own writing, I try to end things as neatly as possible, but not too neatly. For instance, in my last book, Lethal Remedy, the first draft had one of the characters dying of a malignancy, a sort of divine retribution. However, I decided not to make the ending so smooth, with everything coming out all right, so I rewrote the ending to leave that question up in the air. (Sorry, you'll have to read the book to see what I did.)

One thing writers are warned to avoid is the mechanism of Deus ex machina. This means "God out of the machine," and was a device used in classic Greek theater, when a crane lowered actors playing gods onto the scene to bring order out of chaos and give a happy ending. And here's another thing to consider. In my first mentoring class on writing, I was told by an excellent writer of Christian fiction that the hero or heroine had to be the agent of his/her own deliverance. No cavalry riding to the rescue, no external intervention, they had to do it themselves. I'm not sure that's a hard and fast rule, but I've tried to adhere to it, and I think it adds to the tension as a book comes to a close.

For more about the denouement, you can check out this Writer's Digest post

Have you read a book, seen a play or movie, even watched a TV program where the denouement was both unexpected and satisfying? Care to share? Hope you will.

4 comments:

James Scott Bell said...

Timely, Doc, as I am wrapping up my WIP today so I can send it off. Endings are hard. There's an old saying, "New York is filled with great first acts." IOW, a lot of writers could start a play, but not finish it well.

One writer who amazes me in this way is Michael Connelly. How he can find that right touch for each book in his lengthy series is a wonder for a writer to behold.

Richard Mabry said...

Jim, You're exactly right. Although I'm a seat-of-the-pants writer (as opposed to one who plots out every scene), I still make sure I have a beginning, a central turning point, and what you call a "knock-out ending" in mind when I begin a novel.
I agree that Connelly is a master of the denouement. Always enjoy his work.
Thanks so much for dropping by and commenting. Always nice to have a celebrity in the house.

Erica Vetsch said...

I love the ending of the movie Silverado. There's a wee surprise, a few happy endings for some of the characters, and the two that ride off into the sunset...one of them turns and says "We'll be back!" paving the way for your imagination to envision that return.

I also love the TV show Castle, and according to Rick Castle, his daughter Alexis's first word was 'denouement.' :)

Richard Mabry said...

Erica, Silverado is a good example. Although apparently there are many of my writing friends who watch Castle, I'm afraid I don't. However, I think the denouements of The Closer and Blue Bloods are consistently good.
Note to all the mothers out there--see, sometimes TV can be a good thing.